In the Dialogue 1 from Imprinter, the end of the last message is not displaying or displaying outside the screen?, I don't remember it exactly the dialogue so maybe it's actually displaying correctly, then there's a grammal error: The message doesn't end with a dot (.). I know it's no big deal but as I said, it can be that the message is not displaying correctly so I prefer to notify.
The lore messages ends like this in my screen (obvious story spoiler): I believe we derelicts are destined for great things, and I don't
Fast edit:
Zion, dialogue 9, the words between the double commas (") have a single down comma (,) inside it when it should be outside. "words," should be "words", (example for no spoilers)